Everybody has experiences. An experience can be good or bad. Each experience has a special meaning for everyone. Although the experience is sadden, but it can't be easy to forget. An experience can be got everyday. Things that we do can be an experience for us.
I have some experiences that I can't forget them easily. They are meaningful for me. Beside that, they can be my guidance to step forward. Although some of them sadden, but they are memories for me. In conclusion, all of my experiences are part of my life.
Beside that, I have an experience that I think it is the best for me. This experience was in jakarta. It made me happy because I was in PRJ ( Pekan Raya Jakarta) with my brothers. I met Eno Netral and watched Nidji. So now, I want to tell you about my experience when I was in PRJ.
PRJ is an annual event in Jakarta. There, we can find diverse entertainments. For example, music, dances, exhibitions, etc. We also can find some food. Beside that, PRJ can help us to refresh our mind. There are many people who are enthusiasm to go there.
When I went to PRJ, I was so happy. It was my first time to go there. I could see interesting exhibitions. Beside that, I could explore some food. I could take some pics with clowns. I was so interested to watch each exhibition.
Because of PRJ, I could see Nidji and meet Eno Netral. When I was inside a shop, my elder brother called me. He invited me to watch " HIP-HIP HURA" that was also in PRJ. When I knew Girink Nidji was singing, I was so happy. He was more handsome and his voice was more beautiful. After I watched " HIP-HIP HURA ", my elder brother invited me to behind of the stage. There, I met Eno Netral and I took a pic with him. I was so lucky could meet Eno and Watch Nidji.
Beside that, in PRJ I could eat "bakso lapangan tembak". It was my first time to eat it. Bakso lapangan tembak was delicious. Besides, I thought that the name of that meat ball was strange. Actually this food has been famous in Jakarta.
I think all of you have some experiences that are not forgot. Although our experiences are embarrassing, sadden, or happy but they have some meanings for us. Besides, our experiences can be our orientation and also can help us to prove our mistakes in the past. In conclusion, experiences are meaningful for us.
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hai, Denny...
BalasHapusIt's me, risma. I am the teacher who replaced Mr. Chosa for past narrative.
Remember..?
You told about PRJ and actually I did not know what PRJ is before reading your writing. So, thank you to give me new information through your story.
Well, what will I do next..?
Of course, I have to give my comment for your writing as I had told it in the class.
One thing that I like from your writing is you combined a little description in your past narrative.
What I mean by descriptive in your story is your additional information about PRJ (Pekan Raya Jakarta).
I think you come from Jakarta, aren't you? (Pardon me if I'm mistaken.)
You provide one paragraph what is PRJ and it's good for others like me myself who doesn't know anything about it.
But, as your commentator, I have noted some grammatical mistake in your writing. The good thing is you don't make many mistakes, just few of them:
1. "I have some experiences"
Remember that "some" , "any" are followed by single not plural noun.
Therefore, you should write #I have some experience#
2. "I was so interested to watch each exhibition."
The word "interested" is followed by preposition "in" and also followed by gerund "watching".
The correct sentence of you must be like here
#I was so interested in watching exhibition.#
3. "I was so lucky could meet Eno and Watch Nidji."
In your sentence, I see that it is consisting two clause:
a. I was so lucky.
b. Could meet Eno and watch Nidji.
The problem is when there are two classes and are gathered into one sentence, you need to have conjunction.
But in your sentence there is no conjunction.
Maybe, you forget to add it, but it's okay, I'll just remind it.
SO, your sentence can be ..
# I was so lucky that I could meet Eno and watch Nidji.#
or
# I was so lucky I could meet Eno and watch Nidji.#
Well, that's all from me.
I hope you can learn many things from my comment.
And if you still have many questions, you can seem me in my blog and post some question in mine.
But if you want to comment about my performance during teaching your class or just give comment about my content of my blog, just comment it, I will be happy if someone also give his/her opinion about me..
And the last but not very last cuz we can still meet in campus..
Thank you for everything, your writing, and so on..
C u Denny..
thank you for commenting. yes of course, I remember you. I will not forget you all. Thank you for teaching us.
BalasHapuswell done...
BalasHapusnice post,,,but, when you write jakarta, please use capital letter. it must be Jakarta because it is the name of a place.
hehehehe..............
give me some comments too XP
BalasHapus