In my life, I have two dreams. The first is I want to be a good English teacher. I want to be a good English teacher because I like English language. Beside that, when I was junior high school, I was interested with my English teacher. Those reasons make me enthusiasm to be an English teacher. The second is I am going to reply my parents’ kindness. I think my dreams are good for me. In conclusion, I must achieve my dreams to make my life more beautiful.
Beside that, my dreams are always supported by my family and my friends. They make me sure that my dreams are good for me. As a result, their supports make me more enthusiasm to achieve my dreams.
To achieve my dreams I need my spirit. I must try hard. Beside that, I must not be idle. I must practice more to improve my skill in English language. I also have to be sincere in studying hard. In conclusion, I know that these are not easy to me in achieving my dreams.
I need my God to help me in achieving my dreams. I know that my God always blesses my efforts. Beside that, I am sure that I can’t do anything without my God. I know that my God always invites me to good ways. There can be no doubt that God is always with us.
If I can achieve my dreams, I will make my family and my friends proud of me. Beside that, I will not throw away my efforts. Finally, I can reply my parents’ kindness.
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BalasHapusIn my life, I have two dreams. *The first is #(First,) I want to be a good English teacher. I want to be a good English teacher because I like English language. * Beside that #(Besides), when I was junior high school, I was interested with my English teacher. Those reasons make me enthusiasm to be an English teacher. *The second is #(Second,) I am going to *reply (??) #(show my gratitude to) my parents’* kindness. I think my dreams are good for me. *In conclusion, I must achieve my dreams to make my life more beautiful.
*Beside that, my dreams are always supported by my family and my friends. They make me sure that my dreams are good for me. As a result, their supports make me more enthusiasm to achieve my dreams.
To achieve my dreams I need my spirit. I must try hard. Beside that, I must not be idle. I must practice more to improve my skill in English language. I also have to be sincere in studying hard. In conclusion, I know that these are not easy to me in achieving my dreams.
I need my God to help me in achieving my dreams. I know that my God always blesses my efforts. Beside that, I am sure that I can’t do anything without my God. I know that my God always invites me to good ways. There can be no doubt that God is always with us.
If I can achieve my dreams, I will make my family and my friends proud of me. Beside that, I will not throw away my efforts. Finally, I can reply my parents’ kindness.